tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4637249109659842327.post2381728954561670492..comments2023-05-17T08:01:04.015-07:00Comments on Bernardo Gonzalez's AP Lit Blog: Bernardog236http://www.blogger.com/profile/11334933088767655238noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4637249109659842327.post-71651326765723259242017-07-30T18:13:53.799-07:002017-07-30T18:13:53.799-07:00I liked the arrows for their help in organizing yo...<br />I liked the arrows for their help in organizing your notes.<br /><a href="https://animation-review-free.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">โคนัน เดอะมูฟวี่</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4637249109659842327.post-23553703184500359982012-08-26T22:01:44.031-07:002012-08-26T22:01:44.031-07:00The main suggestion I have is that you expand the ...The main suggestion I have is that you expand the thesis some more. The essay would have been better (albeit lengthier) if you included a second method beyond irony that Steinbeck uses to modify beliefs. The support you made for your point was strong, but the entire essay would have been stronger if you had made more variety to your thesis.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17536821730568787871noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4637249109659842327.post-47081427329616540892012-08-26T20:34:30.641-07:002012-08-26T20:34:30.641-07:00Well structured but I think you might have summari...Well structured but I think you might have summarized it a little too much. The other suggestion would be to not start every paragraph with the title of the novel.Rylandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02386645435334489722noreply@blogger.com