tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4637249109659842327.post5493489045567446597..comments2023-05-17T08:01:04.015-07:00Comments on Bernardo Gonzalez's AP Lit Blog: Bernardog236http://www.blogger.com/profile/11334933088767655238noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4637249109659842327.post-39906682400163471212012-08-26T22:07:16.963-07:002012-08-26T22:07:16.963-07:00You make plenty of good points in the essay. One ...You make plenty of good points in the essay. One thing that can be improved on is explaining how Eliot's stylistic devices are used. It's definitely true that she uses imagery, but what kind of feelings does she seek to elicit? It's a good essay, but would be even better if you elaborated on this (and what Ryland already covered).Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17536821730568787871noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4637249109659842327.post-80575182102780896482012-08-26T20:36:20.760-07:002012-08-26T20:36:20.760-07:00Again good structure however I feel that you do no...Again good structure however I feel that you do not add too much input into the essay except for conveying your beliefs through quotes.Rylandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02386645435334489722noreply@blogger.com